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Saturday, 31 August 2013

5 Sentence Story

This is my five sentence story.
There where five words that the sentences had to start with:Quick, Stand, Out, Safety, Embarrassed.
Here is a recording that  I made on sock puppets:




“Quick!” yells my coach from the sideline.
“Stand still then step,” is the next thing I hear, but instead I go straight up the guts. Out my head comes through the whole other team. Safely my arms and legs come through. Embarrassed as I walk away from putting the ball down on the dead ball line “NOOOO, Why me?".

Rockets History

This is my presentation on the history of rockets
Hope you enjoy and comment.

Hyperloop Questions

Here are some questions that I got from the website http://www.kiwikidsnews.co.nz/
At the bottom of each  there are a few questions like these:


Recall questions

Use the article to answer the following questions. Write both the questions and answers down.


1. Who is the main person or group of people in this news article?
Elton Musk
2. What was the key event from the news article?
hyper-fast transport system.

3. Where did this event take place?
No where yet this is an idea for a builder or someone who likes to created the extraordinary things

4. When did this event take place?
Not yet but I think people will be thinking about it.

5. Why did this event happen?
So people can get to their destination faster.

Thinking questions

1. Find quote from the main person in this news article?
Is travel about to change forever?? or no plans to build the system but offered the “open source design” to allow others to pursue a venture.
2. In your own words describe what happened in this news article.
Elon Musk is trying to help other create this for faster travel
4. Tell us when this event happened and explain what might happen in the future.
This might happen in the future.





Thursday, 29 August 2013

Letter to Ken Catran

This is a letter that I wrote to Ken Catran on his book Dead harry.

Dear Ken Catran

During the last few weeks my class room 16 and I have been reading a chapter a day, after every chapter we all couldn't wait till tomorrow to read the next. I am really amazed how someone can have such skills in writing. What I also like is how you always write in the action. This is a totally awesome book and I would definitely recommend it to anyone and I also think adults will enjoy it too.


My favourite character in the book was Sam because I can relate to some to the thing that I have done in my live. e.g like when I was trapped for a few minutes with no lights in the local library and I have a friend called Harry. I also like Sam because of his personality, COOL.


Now just for a few questions:
What got you inspired to be an author?
Is this based on a true story or anything?
How would you say I could create a great story line like you?


My favourite part of your book is when they were lock in the cupboard because it was well written and very dramatic I love how you thought of the reader reading it.


For all of this I would like to say a big thank you and can’t wait to see if you wright a part 2 of dead harry.
Yours sincerely Crighton Murphy :)

p.s I have a blog at http://pridecrightonm.blogspot.co.nz/ and I would love to get a comment from you.

Wednesday, 14 August 2013

My little dragon

Fred the learning dragon
This is Fred


this is a poster that I made on Recite
"Calm down, calm down," I say as my baby dragon Fred is learning to fly and breathe fire
all in one day. Flap there and another one there he keeps going and then “he’s flying he’s finally flying.” He grows for the first time because he was hungry for some fish. “Co co.” ( cocking noise) “What's that?” I say with a gloomy face on. Then I realized “the dragon the dragon,” I shout from the top of my lungs. I sprint as fast as I can into the kitchen “feww” I say wiping my forehead. It was only the my mum making funny noises. BEEP BEEP “that's the smoke alarm,” I shout
“Quick everyone outside,” I hear dad say so out I go. How is the fire just coming out of the kitchen window and nowhere else? We go and have a quick look “oh Fred,” I say with a laugh. It’s all clear to go back in then... BANG. “ahh the oven,”.

“ You are sooo naughty Fred go to your room.” 

TO BE CONTINUED...

Thursday, 8 August 2013

Two Wildebeest And A Crocodile

Today we had to write about a writing prompt It was a video on two wildebeest and a crocodile.

This is my writing:
Two wildebeest are creeping up to the river front on a gloomy morning. Wildebeest One spots something suspicious in the river “Ahh its its a crocodile!” yelled Wildebeest One.
“Oh I get it it’s early in the morning and you're trying to scare me, you can clearly see its a log,” said Wildebeest Two.
“Oh yeah watch this,” Wildebeest One thinks that it is a Crocodile and throws a rock at it. It  doesn't move. “See I told you” says Wildebeest Two and by saying that it got wildebeest so furious it made him jump up and down. Then he couldn't control himself and jumped straight onto the back of the crocodile or was it the top of a log. Wildebeest to looked away for a split second to say hello to Wildebeest Three he turn back and guess what he say on top of the river water... Thats right bones surrounded by blood.
And from that day on all the wildebeest decided to never argue near around or by this river ever again.





Here is the video that I was inspired by:
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